Monday, February 17, 2014

The Ingredients Of Our Lives Comments

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Watching people
Just walk by
Some rushing
Some lovers
...
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Lyn Paul
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Dinesan Madathil 27 February 2014

Life tells a tale and you are tracing its intricacies and components. Well written Lyn.

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The complexities of our lives are here creatively displayed. Well done my friend.

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Hazel Durham 20 February 2014

Stories of our lives all different, like colours of the rainbow, we love, we cry, as we ask the question why? But we survive to face a new and brighter day! Insightful and beautiful write!

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Valerie Dohren 19 February 2014

Everyone has their own story, so many lives and stories to tell - great poem Lyn, and love the alliteration.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 February 2014

the kaleidoscopic view of life in all its colors never ceases to amaze. enjoyed this poem, Lyn.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 February 2014

Thank you for the Inspiring comments for my poems. Thanks a lot.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 February 2014

A Beautiful poem with a Great message. Very true said Lyn.... The Ingredients of each life is different though all are human beings, though they look different but when hungry all search for their ingredients which they can afford. Beautiful way you have presented it. Loved reading it.

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