Saturday, February 21, 2015

The Inevitable Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why should I remember you?
Caged-heart bird of mine; ye flew,
Leaving me in dark unto sky blue
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Susan Williams 18 November 2020

Why ye shimmer in my thought? Why you glister into my dark eyes? - - - > totally lovely lines

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 21 February 2015

Beautiful poem on lost love written with lots of positivity. Good write.

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Rajnish Manga 21 February 2015

True love may return to haunt the lover every now and then in spite of the differences and misunderstandings, the heart continues dreaming about the lost moments to redeem the bond.

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