The Inevitability Comments

t is our truest friend, no one is greater For it frees us from the worldly bondages Bondages of suffering, pain, poverty Transends us unto the realms of infinite bliss....... yet it happens to happen by inevitability as life is just a game inbtween existence and nonexistence by relativity by trudging path from birth to death by mortality.beautiful write with deeper thought, yet of unique genre and, , quite philosophical yet introspectiver too,10++++, thanks for sharing

Good poem. I really like your insights and you write well.

This poem would be great if you had not ended it with text speak 'u' and 'r' try 'you are' if you dont want to ruin future atempts.