Sunday, August 9, 2009

The Indigenous Humanity Comments

Rating: 4.8

We are proud to be humans,
We boast of our unique intelligence,
We commit the most unusual crimes,
Yet we say we are humans.
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari
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Roseann Shawiak 16 April 2014

Very well written poem on humanity. There are evil people among us for sure, sometimes we have to look long and hard for the good ones, but they are there, hiding from the evil ones, but not giving up the fight. We can have a humane world with effort from everyone. Great poem, intense subject material. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Shekhar Joshi 15 August 2009

i have read two of your poems....and the impression that i have is that.....u write on themes/topics which have been spoken about a lot........and that u write nicely.......and also the hope that i see in your poems..... good on this too......above average...... ;)

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Rehana Nazli 09 August 2009

I still believe it’s not the end There’s still some humanity left within There are lots who protect humanity and die for it I still believe we can prove ourselves HUMANE Jameel with a beautiful name, its important to not to give up hope. Yes I agree some people not all are bad. And I really like the way you concluded your poem on a rather positive note. Keep writting, you are a great writer.

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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2009

nice poem, well penned with deep thoughts............10

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