The Indian Man Comments

Keep up the good work: D

very well composed and eloquent

Far too much like the old commercial!

The souls of the fathers and grandfathers hear your song and they rejoice...smiles

Good, very, very good! as the old cowboy song goes: 'The red man was pressed, from HIS place in the West, it's not likely he will ever return...' Thanks for writing this, and thanks for remembering my 'red-brothers'.

A tearful story. I love this, the way you've expressed the pain of the First Nations people. Brilliant work.

And the tides they are a changing...good write.

Yes the world watch in tears all the unfair things that are still happening. We feel as helpless as in the past maybe even more because now we are given a lot of information so we know.. The concern is there but also the shrug and the thought: what can I do? I am so small..Could our tears be mixed with greatest love and send somehow to them..or the least..near?

When people are not united and wherever greed rules the roost there is access and makeshift for foreigners in any country.Afghanistan is one country to exhibit freedom beyond greed.Greed is seasonal.They are proving it and proved it earlier no matter Jesus comes from his Cross to colonise there or 39 developed countries including USA.US is another example of stolen land from indians.The land originally belong to its native indians.But its sad there civilisation has been suppressed with torture.Series of people who came as Kennedy, Nixon, Bush and now the hip-hop man are all from another bushes outside the dungeons of America..therefore its high time indian men there join afghans

It was a very profound and eloquent composition in very few words. And could not agree more with the message of the poem. It was also easy to decipher the poem. Good to see somebody still writing about the greatest atrocities by the white man.

amen brother... one of the great crimes against humanity... in the 'land of the free'... good poetry!

the meaning of this poem is deep if u look in2 it, i would like 2 see a more broaden version of this, pretty good