Monday, June 13, 2011

The Incredible Night I Spent Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought I was dreaming.
You were there when things began to change.
The air was filled with creative opinionated glee,
Then suddenly...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Incredibly well. Excellent theme with plenty of depth. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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