Monday, June 18, 2018

The Incomplete Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waters of the love river were too deep
I was ignorant its banks were so much steep
A few pages of my story are yet to be written
To complete it come back in my arms and sleep
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2018

A beautiful poem magnificently crafted. Very touching. A brilliant translation.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 June 2018

please send my congrats for hie love devotion now a days it seldom happens may say tooee naheen toe kuch baath naheen tooe naheeen towe koi aur sahee

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

A fine translation has been made by you dear Jawadji. Let me quote two lines from your translated poem.... A few pages of my story are yet to be written To complete it come back in my arms and sleep A beautiful love poem by Aarzoo Mehek. Thank you for sharing here.

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Thats the beautiful poem, thought I couldn't read its translation.

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Rini Shibu 18 June 2018

The story which is yet to be completed, waiting for the loved ones inspiration..Beautiful

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