Monday, August 1, 2016

The Incomplete Lines Comments

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When am i going to choose it?
Or when am i going to save it?
The walls listen to my plans and laugh.
They hear every wish of mine going in vain.
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Kirti Sharma
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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

We start many things in life that we do not complete. Sometimes laziness, sometimes change of circumstances and sometimes change in perception keeps us from completing our unfinished works. Nice poem.

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Saadat Tahir 09 February 2017

indeed we steam on in life on those unknown lines... where they go where they end... what turns they will take.. where will we meet some one..or alight... nice lines that ruminate on the jpurney of life lovely content and context liked.. :)

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