Friday, July 7, 2017

The Incident Of The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Laying on my couch,
Late in the night,
I am once again wondering,
Why the hell I can't sleep?
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Gurleen kaur Narang
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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 February 2019

nice one! clever narrative skill! i really enjoyed your poem.

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Glen Kappy 20 August 2017

Hi, Gurleen! I'm just getting to read your poems and read this one first. I l ike the directness of it, and the ending was a surprise and made me laugh. -Glen Kappy

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2017

Teenage! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Ruth Walters 18 July 2017

ha ha, yes it's always th stomach that wins.....a moment on the lips, a lifetime on the hips eh

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I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

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Gurleen kaur Narang

Gurleen kaur Narang

Punjab, India
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