Wednesday, January 6, 2010

The Inch Comments

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Debussy fills me in three-quarter time;
the trombone gliding
up, up and down down
groaning the melody
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Lauren Erimita
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Fred Babbin 06 January 2010

Beautiful poetic thoughts, but you must learn how to write a poem. If not rhyme, at least rhythm. The poem shold sing like Debussy.

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