Monday, October 31, 2011

The Impact Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is pretty, sweet and kind,
Like a beautiful hillside morn,
Blowing breeze and fragrance bind,
Then it is in one's heart born.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Love is everything! And, we need peace and joy on earth. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2014

You have nice sources to write this beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2014

You have nice sources to write this beautiful poem.

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Amy Marie 07 December 2011

I like it! You describe love so nicely here. I want to feel this way too.

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Andrew Blakemore 07 December 2011

Without love we are nothing, beautiful poetry.

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Unwritten Soul 03 December 2011

Emerging warm from cold, that what we can find here...The writing you share really soothing and peaceful art. I agree with all comments here and Luvo was right, but i guess saying in general also can be so beautiful as it touch everyone well..Sweet hand will always conduct sweet writing, because all of these things connecting each other..When soul of you got something to tell, or think let it free may it reach others to feel the same way of what you tried to share..It is a nice poem Mohammad_Unwritten Soul

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Heather Wilkins 10 November 2011

love is a many splendor thing. So many emotions invoved with it. happy, sad, laughter, tears. Lovely writing Mohammad. Keep up the inspirational writing.

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Luvo Mjayezi 07 November 2011

Your poem is lovely but it just feels like you left out yourself in it. You should make it more personal I mean love is somethign personal. all the imagery you have used in your poem is beatutiful and sublime. if you put a bit of yourself in poems like this I promise you, you will be much more meaningful to you and many people will be able to connect with you through it. sorry for the criticism, I really like your descriptions, but I like connecting with people's writings.

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Kaila George 06 November 2011

Its true...so true...love as many face's, it changes, one minute the world is bright, the next its all gloom or doom, but thats what beautiful about it...you learn and you grow...thank you so much for this poem...its 10+

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

nice, beautiful and warming.

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

nice depiction on love.

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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2011

love makes life beautiful, and brings us beautiful poetry, like your lovely poem here. Congrats..

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Olayemi Ayo 03 November 2011

Poet Muhammed you have written a very lovely poem on love. Keep it up. I am supporting you all through the way.

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Chris Guice 02 November 2011

Very well put 10+ I like this alot

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Cosmic Dreamer 02 November 2011

Love brings out the beauty in a soul... I enjoyed reading your poem... Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 01 November 2011

Soft words and gentle structure, well that what a love poem should have :) You done it beautifully :) Hope you keep writing, sorry for late comment here, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, it really have a rainbow feelings :) really nice_Unwritten Soul

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Bernard Snyder 01 November 2011

'It also makes me compose this verse'. Wonderfully written piece Mohammad. Thank you for sharing such a 'piece! ! I too gave this a 10'.

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Vipins Puthooran 01 November 2011

An excellent poem, , , wonderful rhyming scheme! ! ! the depth of love! ! ! ! top marks! ! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 November 2011

Love is the most powerful sentiment of human being. It teaches man how to remain humble when there is a show of pomp and power everywhere. I loved the way you brought out various aspects of love. Great poem. A fine 10 indeed. Thanks for sharing the poem.....

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Cm Montepio 01 November 2011

love is just 4 letter word with so many behind it... pretty well done sir, I love the rhythm of your poem...

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Mohammad Muzzammil

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