The Immoral Days Comments

An honest and revealing examination of oneself, we all in our younger years are not the human beings we could be, but that's why we have room to grow and evolve. Wonderful poem, I am happy to have read this work.

Those were the early days of ignorance, Such days shall never return, I give assurance... Many of us can easily connect to such a situation. Well-penned.

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with spiritual awareness. Thanks for sharing.

Recognizing, rectifying and confessing, thanks a lot sir

Every body goes through this stage in life, some more intense some less some survive and became better a few stayed in there all their lives. Thanks-10

My soul didn't cry, Nor eyes felt shy. How was the immoral blow, The mind full of evil flow. My dear Poet, you have wonderfully portrayed how Pride can lead us astray. Self-willed we go our way and fall. It is a wonderful experience to realize the faults and come back to God. You have portrayed it very well dear Poet. Thank you for this poem.

So nicely penned on both remorse and hope. Beautifull poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.....10

A well written, interesting piece. We all make mistakes in life but to recognise and take responsibility for our weaknesses, and to act upon them is truly a virtue.

Assurance that you won't repeat the mistake is like repentance. Beautiful ink.

well composed and an engaging write. thanks

err is human and understanding better the life is the most acceptable solution and repentance to a certain extent but not to be disturbed the life is the best solution. A value based poem and it is nice.

Strong determination of a strong mind reverses evils

A poem of great remorse that is very re-assuring at the end. May God bless you, friend, to tread the path of virtues.

Gaining strength and courage through admitting our faults is a giant step towards recovery in our lives. Seeing and admitting enables self to begin changing, every step no matter how big or little is a step into the future of better times to come. Congratulations on your renewal, may you help and inspire others along the way through your poetry. Poetry is a fantastic healer, touching the soul, taking us on a solo journey of self-realization. Great poem, very inspirational! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Those were the early days of ignorance, Such days shall never return, I give assurance.....really it is, let's hope better future. Wonderful imaginary nicely presented. A beautiful poem I like best.

A poem of both remorse and hope. Nice flow.

To own a mistake is an incredible step and no one is short on making these. A beautiful poem and I wish you such happiness.

A poem that anyone can draw lessons from. Written in an honest way in great rhyming! Impressive selfreflection, guilt trip. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

A thoughtful write. Regrets of the past left over tears for present. If one realises the fact, and through positive way sins can be washed away. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

Those were the early days of ignorance, Such days shall never return, I give assurance... nice lines... God gives full protection for those who give full assurances in prayers and in action for offering no more reaction