Wednesday, July 7, 2010

The Illusion Of Life Comments

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The things you see
They can make you bare the questions of curiosity
They can swallow the purpose of fantasy
And overtake your consciousness of thoughts
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David Beckham 13 August 2010

Great Philosophical ideas expressed in this poem. I don't even have answers, but we can continue to grow and hopefully figure things out. Thanks for sharing

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Craig Mize 18 July 2010

You remind me of this poet that met in Atlanta GA. Her name was Mystic Fire and all of her poems spoke nothing but the truth sometimes it was the harsh truth but nether less the truth. She is one of the best new poets that I know and you are on her level with the past two poems of us that I read.

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Felicia Garcia 18 July 2010

gurl you knw thats true not all things in life is true so hold on to things you cherrish most

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