The Illusion Of A Knight Comments
Who will draw my battle lines from the next dawn
And who will stop the Sun from setting for tonight?
The sky had her face turned red with the blood
Of the sun who had raged a war of heat till this evening.
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Galloping horses and stealthily flying drones are all around. There is no escape for one who wishes to live in peace. The situation is beautifully put in the poem.
A Wonderful write. Each words beautifully portrayed in sequence. How many soldiers might have fallen in trap of enemies and how brutally they might have been killed. If a person dies in a battlefield is better than brutally killed after being captivated. So cruel will be treatment. I loved the way you presented it.
In this war ridden world, it is so natural that we are deluged by illusions of this kind! People in the war torn areas always fear gun shots and drawn cudgels! The man on horse back may be perhaps a saviour! Powerful poem reflecting the turbulence of the times!
Military struggle and armed conflict between nations is a common sight nowadays rather the pride of so called civilised nations and might is right can not be an exception, so the illusion of knight will haunt the concerned ones always......Dineshji......Superb write............
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7/26/2025 11:02:33 AM # 1.0.0
A very well constructed poem mentioning war, cruelty, bloodshed and captivation which all man made atrocity to take away the peace and normalcy of human life. In my way I am to say.... humanity is at stake (one of my poems name) ... very nice Dinesh.