The Ignored Child Comments

You have taken my mobile, And made it a projectile, You have taken my pen, On the wall you've written, Now get out, I swear, Thanks God no answer! ........liked this stanza.

Very interesting & lovely.

What a lovely poem! Beautiful.................

Good poem with a twist of humor, full of the loveliness of a child. Lovely read

A lovely elaboration about the sweet little angel about her anger, desire and playful nature which pleases my heart with a soothing comfort..... yhanks for sharing

Beautiful fluent and eloquent write sir.

Ohhh what a nice poem.. Excellent. Perhaps she is that little cute Chandni? I guess..I really love to read it. Really your poems are so beautiful that one can spend a full day with your poems. I love to read it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with everybody.

Very interesting write... So very spontaneous and quite natural emotions, a grandpa feels for a naughty little one! Enjoyed much!

Dear Bro, different thoughts are cleverly mingled into a poem with soft feelings. Loved reding it. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

Your cute grand daughter is an angel. I can picturise each description you gave in this beautiful poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.