Thursday, January 5, 2006

The Ignorant Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rose of different colour stood alone
amidst the grasses on the farmer's land
and in the night when moon and stars all shone
she searched her soul deep down, inside the sand.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 05 January 2006

I hope this is an isolated incident Herbert, one poor rose, what a way to go, with the odour it was probably dead before it 'hit'! Asphyxiated! Zapped! What a sad poem. Love Ernestine XXX

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 January 2006

Witty anti-'romanticising' of traditional symbol of beauty and perfection. People are a lot like your roses, Herbert, namely ignorant, shortsighted, self-centred (some people, anyway) , ...and all too vulnerable.

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Mary Nagy 05 January 2006

This is a great poem Herbert............an interesting ''lesson'' here as well. Wonderful work as usual. :) Sincerely, Mary

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