Wednesday, August 17, 2005

The Idiot's Funeral Comments

Rating: 4.5

I only went because I had to.
I knew it would be a circus.
He drove his yellow Porsche down to the lake,
Left his wife lying on the sofa watching TV,
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Michael Philips
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Chuck Audette 19 August 2005

Michael, your poems show a keen and witty observation of the human creature, foibles and all. I enjoyed reading them. -chuck

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David Gerardino 17 August 2005

I like the poem, i can see this picture perfect, from beginning to end....

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Raynette Eitel 17 August 2005

You have a funny mind! I am always amazed at what topics produce a poem. This one goes beyond amazement. Raynette

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