Sunday, February 16, 2014

The Idea Of An Adult Comments

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Thoughts to be pondered on a happy note
we are the people of this nation
look up and jump around with joy
for happiness has unknown bounds
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PRIYANKA BHANDARKAR
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Roseann Shawiak 13 March 2014

Again, to be understood with clarity, punctuation needs to be inserted, creating finite sentences so they can be understood and their meanings come across. It is a good poem about virtues and learning them. Please keep writing, I will read more as I am able. Thank you for sharing, I do like your poetry. RoseAnn

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