Wednesday, October 7, 2009

The Idea Comments

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We don't fall in love,
we fall into the idea of it.
the idea that anything is possible,
the idea that we can need and be needed,
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Quin Faas 17 October 2009

i find that the ending of this poem makes an absolute statement...within this piece..

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Adeline Foster 07 October 2009

The idea here is sound and says it like it is. Well written. Perhaps you should read my Bloom Of Youth. Please comment. Adeline

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