Tuesday, July 24, 2012

The Ice That Breaks Me Comments

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Ice blue eyes,
Look at me.
Don't let him hear my cries,
Don't let him see.
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Star Crossed Lady
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Jeri Martindale 21 January 2014

Love this. You are a great writer. I say write about what inspires u. Sometimes death isn't actual death...

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Guess Who 24 December 2012

very touching, moving poem....... Sometimes fear of not being accepted can cause bad emotions....... like the flow of your poem very beautiful description........ you are talented.......... (Don't talk alot about death it's a very dark subject) ...... Keep it up: GuessWho

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