Tuesday, August 25, 2015

The Ice Cube Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the dining table I see a bottle of wine,
Me! Water in a tray of molds
kept in a freezer,
At every moment I am colder,
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Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Darlene Walsh 16 September 2015

LOL, A lovely and entertaining love story from the ice cubes POV. My favorite lines: Have a few sips, I’ll kiss your lips,

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Valsa George 25 August 2015

I see the real romantic in you Akhtarji! Your imagination seems to have no visible limits! Splendid write!

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Khalid Saifullah 25 August 2015

Amazing and wonderful..........................................10

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Beautifully done Akhtar.I enjoyed reading it. Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Kelly Kurt 25 August 2015

A very sensual poem, Akhtar. My pulse has increased.: -)

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