Saturday, July 14, 2012

The 'I' Volatile Comments

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I was designed to vanish;
and I know I have to.
I may hide in no where,
and I am sure I have to.
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Pradeep Uthaman
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Apurva Jain 16 July 2012

it's... GOOD... really good... too bad we are 'designed to die'.... but too good... we get the time live every day and every second of this life... with such beautiful people around us... :)

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Elena Sandu 16 July 2012

But I was made to vanish; and to hide in no where. And to sail so far, a voyage of no return. Yes indeed, beautiful interesting and deep, for me a joy the read, thank you for share.

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Darkangel Flyfree 15 July 2012

This is really good! Sad and beautiful at the same time, and you are right we must leave at some point, but try to enjoy it while we can! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2012

Very nice. Kasia is right. You opened up a door the door of our minds. There is deep philosophy and at the same time a loveable solution too.Great, Invisible Man!

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Pradeep Uthaman 14 July 2012

Hi..Kasia Fedyk. Thank you for reading dear.

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Kasia Fedyk 14 July 2012

Very beautiful and the imagination of the truth is very powerful you have opened such door for our minds to visualize and embrace these moments. The fragile parts of us, the soul everlasting so much to emebrace in this beauty of a poem. Magnificent! Love, kasia Thank you.

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Pradeep Uthaman 31 March 2022

Thank yiu for encouraging words

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