Friday, October 19, 2018

The I-M-Possible Dream Comments

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THE I-M-POSSIBLE DREAM

On an early morning flight, he came out bright
As the sun beamed his eyes gleamed
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Ritika Deborah George
fly
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 November 2018

Once Bruce said TRY AND TRY AGAIN You have now picked up the strain let come rain storm or tsunami you are a poet awami try and give hope to all you come across few gals r found like you I have gone the world across You have the makings of a baker of POETRY you will do well indeed make lovely poetry pastry all r in need

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Ritika George 19 November 2018

wow.. Thank you so much for your wonderful lines. In process of writing more, keep admiring, motivating and inspiring :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

And, no dream is impossible

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Ritika George 17 November 2018

Indeed sir, that is why I chose the title which says I am possible :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

Hi Ritika, Lovely poem. I remember a story I had read a kitty child, possibly in Readers Digest- the name was Jonathan Livingstone Sea gull, or something like that. It is about how the little bird learns to fly. How his mother encourages him on his first flight. Your poem reminds me of the story of Robert Bruce as well... Persevearance is the road to success.

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Ritika George 17 November 2018

I am happy that you can connect with my poem. Thank you sir

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Hidden treasure is exposed now. Wow Ritika,an excellent poetess.keep it up.God bless you.

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Ritika George 16 November 2018

Its all your blessings ma'am...I am happy to receive an appreciation from you. Thank you so much for reading

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Dave Walker 27 October 2018

A wonderful thoughtful poem.

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Mitali 23 October 2018

Gr8👍👍

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

i have referred the bird as 'HE'. Moreover i feel somewhere its a story of all.Its all about dreams hope and never ending journey to heights..... thank u for your explanation of your poem. thank u again. he sighed. Strength restored, he took a strode Went up high to the sky Eyes sparkled; all he knew was to fly. Skies to conquer......... let your conquering spirit soar inspite of storm and rain and darknights.......... tha nku for your determination dear poetess. tony

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Ritika George 23 October 2018

Once again thank you sir for taking out time and reading my piece. Please keep encouraging :) Regards to you

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Muhammad Arif 23 October 2018

Nice poem Ritz..

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Ritika George 22 October 2018

Thank you so much for your appreciation. Please keep reading

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Frank 20 October 2018

Excellent.

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Kratima Thakur 20 October 2018

Amazing keep writing n keep amazing us

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Ritika Deborah George

Ritika Deborah George

lucknow, India
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