Monday, June 30, 2008

The Hurt In Her Heart. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When she goes home everyday.
She realizes she worked too hard to just let it all fall
Everyday the same game.
Wake up, go to school, put on a fake smile, come home, and study.
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millie st.claire
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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

wow. that guy sucks. sensitive piece.

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Bobbie Jo ..... 01 July 2008

nice one..it shows how hard sum1 can work and ones dont appreciate it..

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Bill Thomas 30 June 2008

Good work, Millie - one can really feel the pain of betrayal. Keep writing! !

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Chris Newlash 30 June 2008

That's a very sad story

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