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favorite lines so far: and around and around, And suddenly I'm more lost than I ever was found.......................don't tell me! written by a WOMAN about some bad MAN! ! ! : (( and: what is the harm if I succumb, once more to your charm and get lost, in your smile.............yikes! ! ! i'm not convinced that shoo is used properly, but.............i understand, i think. 'You' are weak and shooing (away) the 'broken promises'. YES, you later say you are weak. bingo! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - shoo SHo͞o/ exclamation exclamation: shoo 1. a word said to frighten or drive away a person or animal. verb verb: shoo; 3rd person present: shoos; past tense: shooed; past participle: shooed; gerund or present participle: shooing 1. make (a person or animal) go away by waving one's arms at them, saying “shoo, ” or otherwise acting in a discouraging manner. I went to comfort her but she shooed me away - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - and: My heart never beats so loud or so steady, As when I believe, in the fairytale of today, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i play it safe and don't make too many 'promises'! ! ! but i still get kicked in the teeth once in a while and my mate feels the same way............once in a while. and so the story goes! ; ( to MyPoemList maybe a showcase poem? i hope this isn't (often) the story of Elena's life. bri :)