The Hunter Comments

Nicely penned greenwolf

I really liked this one. a little different formating, but all was well. awesome write.

brilliant poem sir.....I truly loved it...10

Great description of hunter and prey...I like this poem alot.

It was okay. Not truly my cup of tea but out of the few I have read of yours one of the better ones. Thanks

Feline hunters! Wonderful...until the decide to bring home the trophy and leave it on your front step...: -) You had me in suspense until the very end...so nice. Hugs, Dee

I think this my favorite so far. It just rolled off my tongue as I spoke your words. Having four of my own, I think you are talking about your cat. Tell me if I'm wrong. ~ Sara

Purrrrrrfect rhythm Purrrrrrfect rhyme Purrrrrfectly Pleasing To tis heart of mine.

I like the flow and the way the rhyming makes it sound. Truly there is thrill in the hunt.

I kind of disagree with Katie Unknown.. i believe it is one of your best simply because its different. shows versitility on your part. important quality for a poet to posses. great work

This is a very different peice.. not your best but still well writen.

good poem Greenwolf; i have voted also to incluse u into the top 500 poets with respect to number of voters...all the best

Good job Greenwolfe. I love the gentle irony of the fierce hunter affectionately purring in your lap. My cat Zoe and I aren't so far different. He might mount a mole above the mantel and I might choose a Big Mac box for my trophy.

I like this poem, it's not as good as 'Sorry', so I'll give it an 8. Ki o tsukete kudasai! (Please take care!)

I read it three times. I like how it flows. Great poem. Thank you for inviting me to read it.

In between the perfectly rhyming lines lies the wonderful philosophy of nature’s constant hunting process. A big cat as he pictures it, the poet does not try to flee or escape. Instead he tames the thoughts about it and keeps beside him friendly…a very good poem…very good construction technique…10/10

The poem has a natural rhythm to it and the rhymes fit right in. Very well constructed. It says a lot about nature and ourselves. It brings the out-of-doors into the den, pre-historic into the historic, untame world into the 'tame' world. It has a lot of hidden meaning which I like about poems and can provoke a lot of thought and discussion.

It is perfectly read, you successfully used 'the Womanly rhyme', and causes also beautiful associations, Wolfey. Tsira

had to smile reading this one

thank you for directing me to this poem.. i think i would like to meet this cat of yours.. maybe he could hang out with my cat and share a tale or a mouse's leg