Wednesday, April 2, 2014

The Hunter Comments

Rating: 5.0

No bearings required
instinct is his guide
as the hunter tracks back to his love.
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Iris Blue
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Brian Jani 05 June 2014

What a nice poem iris

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Jim Hogg 11 April 2014

Love this and its rhythm Justine... the rhythm of the hunter tracking *back to his love ... perfect form for the theme...it's got the feel of one that might have been conceived while running or dancing... full of imagery that evokes the wild, natural forces that are greater than and that steer the individual beast/human... the 5 freak has a judgement problem ... xx

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