Dew wets the grass
I am the hunter
I walk a deadly path
I am hunting
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Very nice poem. TEARING AT HER FOR WHAT I WANT makes an abrupt change in my thinking. Up to that point I thought of the hunter as being human, but then it seems the hunter is another animal, such as a cougar. I really enjoyed this.
This poem reads the mind of a hunter in the jungle. We are all hunters one way or the other. Life is about hunting. Great write. I like your simple style
When reading this, I feel the story, I become the hunter. Great piece of writing!
the hunter and the hunted one have done well with words..................: -)
Great Poem! ! One of the best. I am not a hunter by nature, but I felt like I was a part of the hunt. Thanks
Awesome. At first I visualized myself when I used to hunt with a bow but by the close I felt more like a wolf.
Wet with the dew of passion! Well done my friend!
It's a good poem. I like how it is simple and yet effective
That's high praise from Tai. Great, simple, focused. Who is the hunter? Words of praise or something blunter?
Look behind ya girlie! lol Nice stalking poem. 9 from me. Grinning Tai
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