Thursday, November 3, 2005

The Hunter Comments

Rating: 3.8

Dew wets the grass
I am the hunter
I walk a deadly path
I am hunting
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Fox Nekitsune
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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 17 September 2022

Fox, A Hunter?

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Kim Barney 22 November 2014

Very nice poem. TEARING AT HER FOR WHAT I WANT makes an abrupt change in my thinking. Up to that point I thought of the hunter as being human, but then it seems the hunter is another animal, such as a cougar. I really enjoyed this.

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Brian Jani 05 June 2014

What an amazing poem

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Jaya Varma 23 November 2013

awesome poem..really..a classic with simplicity..

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Jayne Davies 22 November 2013

A good write! Well done

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Babatunde Aremu 22 January 2013

This poem reads the mind of a hunter in the jungle. We are all hunters one way or the other. Life is about hunting. Great write. I like your simple style

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Rodney Vali 18 January 2013

When reading this, I feel the story, I become the hunter. Great piece of writing!

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Gajanan Mishra 08 January 2013

Again I smell beautiful fur so close now. thanks.

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Soulful Heart 01 January 2013

the hunter and the hunted one have done well with words..................: -)

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Kenny Nelson 26 December 2012

Very descriptive, I liked it!

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Emmanuel Ogundeji 17 December 2012

gr8 poem it gave a vivid imagination of the story

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Patricia Grantham 13 December 2012

Great Poem! ! One of the best. I am not a hunter by nature, but I felt like I was a part of the hunt. Thanks

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Tony Karas 10 December 2012

Awesome. At first I visualized myself when I used to hunt with a bow but by the close I felt more like a wolf.

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Wet with the dew of passion! Well done my friend!

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Rachel Branscombe 01 December 2012

It's a good poem. I like how it is simple and yet effective

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Poet Dragon 28 November 2012

That's high praise from Tai. Great, simple, focused. Who is the hunter? Words of praise or something blunter?

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***** ********* 03 November 2005

Look behind ya girlie! lol Nice stalking poem. 9 from me. Grinning Tai

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