Thursday, January 8, 2009

The Hunter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep in the jungle of your confused soul,
you can see a man carrying a rifle,
you start noticing in his eyes something unfamiliar,
a look of mystery, he must be searching for something.
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Pilar Killen 31 January 2009

amazing love the theme too

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Bonnie Collins 13 January 2009

This is filled with alot of drama, and enjoyed how you used the theme of hunting to comepare a broken heart.. Very clever and filled with much imagery..... Very good, keep up your outstanding work.... I seem to notice your writtings are versitile, which is very good quality...... Bonnie

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