Monday, May 25, 2009

The Hunter Comments

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She prowls along the majestic forrests
She prances here and there
She moves with stealthily legs
And, creeps toward her prey
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Alexandria Rios
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Brian Jani 06 June 2014

Interesting poem here alexandria

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Alex Gomez 02 June 2009

This is good. I like your vocabulary usage and your description in this one. I would suggest fixing up a few spelling errors, though.

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

takes a brave heart to write an ode to the wolve.. but kept us guessing and very nice cpennoing there cheers

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Alexandria Rios

Alexandria Rios

Mesa, AZ
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