Hidden in the sigh of the wind
a low keening cry reverberates
off the craggy hilltops.
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Most distubing in certain ways. It holds a great deal of imagery that's for sure. I sense the metaphor of the animals is meant to stand for something else. I'm probably wrong. :) But it seems to go beyond the hunting of animals.. much futher.
Whatever it is that you wanted to convey, it is the victory that counts. Words are finely presented here, and you have the reader to gasps the way you project the encounter..This is a beautiful piece, Aimee..You got lots of talent..take care of you Love, Meggie