a ping rings so slight
off our submarine hull
faces go white
this isn't a drill
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Chuck, That took a long, long time to get there, but when it did - - - it was explosive! I'm not sure that that came out as the compliment that it was meant to be! B.V.A.
You need help, chuck...thank goodness. You can account on me any time...due reward for the laughs :) jack
Great 'Slam Poetry' to the plastic money institutions. We'd all best disembark these plastic ships or we may go down with the Captian there. Clever and suspenseful rhyming. Barb
How low can these Banks go, with their depth charges so high? Danny
I cannot fathom how you come up with these poems- you're plumbing new debts! Very good- possible Capital one commercial material