Friday, April 21, 2006

The Hunt For Red October Comments

Rating: 5.0

a ping rings so slight
off our submarine hull
faces go white
this isn't a drill
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Chuck Audette
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John Mccullagh 23 January 2010

I cannot fathom how you come up with these poems- you're plumbing new debts! Very good- possible Capital one commercial material

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Barry Van Allen 02 May 2007

Chuck, That took a long, long time to get there, but when it did - - - it was explosive! I'm not sure that that came out as the compliment that it was meant to be! B.V.A.

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jack russell 15 December 2006

You need help, chuck...thank goodness. You can account on me any time...due reward for the laughs :) jack

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Anna Russell 26 April 2006

Oh how I relate! A great poem Chuck. Hugs Anna xxx

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Barbara Attaway 21 April 2006

Great 'Slam Poetry' to the plastic money institutions. We'd all best disembark these plastic ships or we may go down with the Captian there. Clever and suspenseful rhyming. Barb

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Danny Reynolds 21 April 2006

How low can these Banks go, with their depth charges so high? Danny

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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