Thursday, June 26, 2008

The Hunt Comments

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Her beautiful visage, a snare and delusion
screening the verity of her malicious character
A deceitful smile, an enchanting flattery
baits for her tonight’s hunt
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Neha Kaushik
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Andrew Lockley 26 June 2008

wooow that was soo good, obviously youve been writing for a long time it shows in this poem. Im surely going to read your others now :) I liked the title aswell even though it is an obvious choice, but i didnt expect it to be a women, great poem :) ! ! !

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