Skin stretched over his ribcage
My eyes moistened looking at his feeble image.
Sweeping the floor of Borivali Fast
Approaching me with his hands outstretched.
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Missed reading this one earlier....Humbling, heartwarming and mind awakening rousing us from our cozy worlds that we live in! ! I had written on a similar subject but have no hesistation in saying that yours is better! ! Love...TO
Preets, this is a heart-warming poem written with warmth and humility and containing a profound message. Beautiful work. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
POIGNANT WRITE, PREETS...Profound delivery in every facet of literary principle A fine penning'''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Thers so much 2 learn from such moments in life.Thank you for sharing one such moment of urs.Wonderful poem. Ashish.
lovely write up preets.. if only every one could feel the pain n anguish hidden in it n learn not to crib over petty things..
that was beautiful, Preeti, i have written a poem on the same subject on My space but in Hindi...... a full 10 to u regards arti
A portrait of a hungry boy, Preeti has drawn thro' her powerful word. The whole scene comes before me like a flash back as I am tempted read it once more. Nice Preeti. Nice Poem.
great poem preets...this one is your 100th and a landmark poem...you are sensitive soul...great to know you preets...i was right from the start impressed with your maturity...wish you all the luck for a great and fulfilling future...love...nalini
BRAVO.... Preeti, if you can do so much when 18 - I am sure you will make a difference to the world sometime in your future. This is a monumental piece for all of us here who read this but unable to do much for the less fortunate ones - you made that difference......... this world needs more people like you... who can make that teeny-weeny bit of difference to make this world a better place to live in. This poem is an awakening of its kind. NEVER STOP WRITING..... WE JUST LOVE TO READ YOU. (I wish they had options to vote more than 10) .
Fantastic write. Moving very much. Very well done.