A little living thing
With its head nodded
That wants to dig into the ground;
Its thick and frail limbs
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Very good. Very well written. Extremely important message. So moving. I hope everybody in this whole wide world reads it.
You've captured the scenes with conviction, your choice of words are good too.The image is sad, and you've painted it perfectly. Kudos to u. Preets
Dear Rex, I would like to publish your poem on a website we are in the process of creating against hunger. Please find in your PoemHunter inbox more explanation. Thanks in advance. Hans