Thursday, May 6, 2010
The Hunger Comments
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The hunger within is hard to describe.
It's a void that consumes me
side to side.
It's not just the food that I crave.
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Will F. D. Blackman
20 May 2010
I think your poem describes nicely the struggles we can have within ourselves. I believe in witing the poem that hunger was curbed and opens the doors to other aspects in life wich can be fulfilling.
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7/26/2025 2:45:46 AM # 1.0.0
the penultimate stanza lines provide the cake that makes the hunger vanisfh... nice poem Judy...loneliness isn't worth a hug...ignore the feeling... you find yorself engaged...10