The Hummingbird Comments
He hovers above the delicate flowers,
His wings can vibrate with exceptional powers,
And with his long beak, draws out nectar sweet,
Making him the world's best selector petite.
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Dear Earnestine, Your 'Humingbird' imagery is an absolute delight! Wonderful write! Best ~ Debora
A lovely piece, Ernestine. the second stanza is really beautiful and I love the rhyme that flows throu. I also like that you have the last stanza as a couplet, that works very well.
These are words so fine, I have really enjoyed this one, one of my absolute favourites and the flow, well, Superb, another high standard piece from you Ernestine Love duncan X
Lovely work, Ernestine. Very serene and bright. Warm regards, Sandra
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8/4/2025 4:31:01 AM # 1.0.0
Oh how well you capture this! And yes... I love my hummingbirds too!