The hummingbird saw it
The crazed look
The evil in his eyes
And the hate
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A poignant poem, very well crafted to touch the readers heart deep. Well done, dear poetess!
I am seldom 'awe struck' by a poem on this site. This is one of those exceptions. Thank you for sharing.
The hummingbird saw the separation of genders Heard the threats Then...then... The blood spattered.. sad, facts of life.. thank u deear poetess. tony
Very touching expression of violence. Very nicely crafted. Thanks for sharing.
I love to watch the movements of hummingbirds... it's a beautiful poem!