Thursday, December 12, 2019

The Hummingbird Saw It Comments

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The hummingbird saw it
The crazed look
The evil in his eyes
And the hate
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2021

I love to watch the movements of hummingbirds... it's a beautiful poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 March 2020

A poignant poem, very well crafted to touch the readers heart deep. Well done, dear poetess!

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Kelly Kurt 23 December 2019

I am seldom 'awe struck' by a poem on this site. This is one of those exceptions. Thank you for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2019

The hummingbird saw the separation of genders Heard the threats Then...then... The blood spattered.. sad, facts of life.. thank u deear poetess. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 December 2019

Very touching expression of violence. Very nicely crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 17 December 2019

Can we get that hummingbird to testify in court?

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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