The Humming Hope In Time Comments

Even just a glimmer of hope can really turn things around especially When it comes to love and passion. Love can be so deep sometimes it causes us to lose all sense of levity. Then we begin to ask the question how can something that feels so good cause so many problems? A nice write, keep on penning.

A very good poem, If this feeling is sin let the Hell wins These are great lines indeed, a passionate theme and a smooth rhythm, welldone,

True feelings simply stated. A lovely poem

very nice indeed......

Feelings and thoughts simply stated always has the desired effect, nicely written.

the poem flows well indeed.we have to keep our hopes.who knows what happens at last.maybe it never gonna to be changed. actaully it s not a dark one.i think this is a love poem with the wonderful ending~nb

The poem is beautiful and I agree the title does not matter that much. What really matters is the words of the poem and message that lie there in.

Brilliant dear. Nice references. You should be read. I loved this piece of yours. without you, heaven lost its brand Very very nice

beautifully done, a real expression of the heart.

Your passion for your sweet love has grown to such an extent that you feel that without her life will become meaningless and even Heaven will lose all its charm! There is no need for any self reproach! Carry on! 54A nice poem! ! Thanks for the invitation!

Beautifully expressed of such strong emotions that without your lover heaven has even lost its brand!

I think we have a misunderstanding here, especially for elizabeth and soul in this poem, I did not ask for the title but of course I appreciate the feedback that has been given and I liked the title proposed by elizabeth As for the title of the poem to demand that I send it to a poem which is now titled just an ordinary bridge for extraordinary dreams once again I thank you for your input

The poem delivered from your heart, we felt it that way, now i am sorry for being late, this already have a new title and it is great one..but i hope you try to make brighter poem that tell what your courage in you..let it be out and you will find it will be a stronger side of you...and i would call it as The return of my reflection...well if you ever write it that will be the name hahahahaha.._SOul

Adheez, you have asked me to do something with the title. I think the content is really fine. But if I were to give the title, I would call it- The Humming Hope in Time. Thanks for sharing and asking for response. Take care and keep on posting.

Plea for love is indeed no crime in life! Heaven on Earth lies in love only! Nice poem, my friend!

Nice one. i can see some mixtures in the structures and rhythm patterns that you have used i your work, this is really good and lovely.well done.

So unique expression.Speechless.

If this feeling is sin let the Hell wins nice

Our emotions are core not sins. Often mental health issues needing professional care. Sins are human constructs to control human behaviour via theism. Whereas the individual is ultimately responsible for their own actions and behaviour seemingly good or bad and must accept responsibility rather than outsource it to nonexistent or perceived entities for justification or judgement by way of abrogating personal responsibility for those actions and consequences.

A very soul searching write. Our actions sometimes speak louder than our words. Thanks.