'' The Human Is Now, But A Snack '' Comments

AS A BONUS COMMENT: What makes " Tulsi Shrestha" think this is " imagination" ? ? If you care to respond to my comment(s) , please send as a message even if you leave your response also on this page. i rarely return to the scenes of my crimes. bri :)

3 – Oops! I numbered my ‘2nd’ comment as “1”; it should read “2”. And this is “3”. " A few will be saved, " i'd just start with " Few" . " Their captors depraved, " i'd put " being" after " captors" you use a unique punctuation style! " elite" ? perhaps. perhaps not. Won't God save us? ? to MyPoemList bri :)

1 – usually i'd not use the comma in the title sentence, but here i like it. line 1 i'd replace " From" with " Of" . i like the rhyming, but.." revolution" ? who is revolting from whom? or am i using the wrong definition? maybe.

1- i like it well enough. i am One Of Them. " The Pioneer plaques are a pair of gold-anodized aluminum plaques that were placed on board the 1972 Pioneer 10 and 1973 Pioneer 11 spacecraft, featuring a pictorial message, in case either Pioneer 10 or 11 is intercepted by intelligent extraterrestrial life."

Flights of imagination as regard victory of aliens, beautifully crafted to reveal articulation skill of poet.Really aneed amazing piece.