Tuesday, October 23, 2012

The Human Heart Comments

Rating: 4.7

O' heart, I wonder how you can store
so many different emotions of ours
in just thy four puny chambers
while pumping away the liquid of life
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Akhtar Jawad 23 April 2024

A human heart is the seat of God. To admire a human heart is to admire God. S.Zaynab Kamoonpury Has nicely praised the human heart. Indeed she is a good poetess!

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Tom Allport 04 January 2024

A wonderful write with heartfelt words...well penned

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Michael Hopkins 21 January 2023

A heart felt poem indeed

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The Original Tom Maxwell 25 October 2022

very good words thanks for sharing

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Dr. Antony Theodore 21 August 2022

O' heart but we find in you as well the bad bad emotion of jealousy Such a potpourri of emotions in you dwell Help filter out any wrong ones for me! Reality of lifem emotiuons, evil and good in us. a very fine poem dear poet. tony

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AFFAQ NABI 21 January 2021

Beautiful poem, i felt a a sweet joy while reading it, Blessings, for painting this lovely rhyme.....

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Adilson Pinto 27 September 2020

This is really a beautiful poetical and philosophical consideration about our heart! Yes dear poet: we live many and many emotions daily, and our heart must keep itself strong! Yes, yes: a place to our God must be reserved, when surely we feel the best emotion of all! Feeling this emotion surely only it makes well, very well to our heart which thanks us! Please accept a fraternal hug from Brazil!

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Sandra Feldman 13 August 2020

A gracious, beautiful poem, So different, charming and complete. Loved every word. Bless your poetic heart and your thoughts deep, so far reaching and sweet. A poem to keep, close at heart. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2020

A beautiful work of art. I liked the rhythmic splendour of the poem's couplets. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Zaynab.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 November 2019

We don't see a few of our organs but we can listen to the beats of our hearts, perhaps it's God who speaks in His own language.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 August 2019

Human heart is the source of man’s thoughts and deeds. We should all therefore guard our hearts in order not to depart from God’s lovely commands. These sacred statutes are the only choice we should make to be worthy of God... A significant poem, dear Ma’am Zaynab...10++++

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Dev Anand 18 October 2018

A mere four chambers indeed but spacious are they invite therein whomsoever in the world you may But in the end forget not to reserve atleast a single chamber for its Creator, to preserve..even when we are in love, forget not to give a place for the creator...... a very good poem dear poetess. tony

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever such deep and flowing thoughts that touches one's heart! .. And makes us think twice about the dark and the beauty in life! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Luz Hanaii 26 July 2018

I don't like this site, I can't seem to find my comment? Hope it shows up latter? Well penned, the heart does not lie, it measures good and bad, therefore you can feel love or hate. Blessings to you. Excuse if you get two comments.

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Luz Hanaii 26 July 2018

Well penned, I agree our heart is like a thermometer, that can detect love or hate. We may lie to ourselves but our heart does lie. Many blessings to you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2018

But in the end forget not to reserve atleast a single chamber for its Creator, to preserve, , , , , , , , you become at the end very very[ spiritual my dear poetess. that was fine to see that... l ove it... God blesss u for that. tony

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Soulful Heart 09 June 2016

heart the boon and bane of mankind..............nicely written on a positive note....

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015

To discover love with the muse of the heart. Nice work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2015

So nice poem love and hate you beautifully relate in different style even if apart by mies

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2015

The heart has chamber of love and hate, happiness and rage, bravery and fear but we have to choose the bright side of these. A human heart should have love and sympathy to other. A beautiful poem nicely depicted and presented. Thank you for posting such intensive poem that I like most.

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