Thursday, April 26, 2007

The Human Cup Comments

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On my wrist is a crimson stain
that shows the physical pain,
that I endure
to let the emotional pain pour...
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Amber Elzey
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Michael Fischer 26 April 2007

Great poem! Good use of language and well crafted. I hope you can overcome this addiction and concentrate on writing or some other outlet. I wish you the best Amber. Take care. -Michael

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Madly In Love 26 April 2007

I feel so much pain in ur poems if u need someone to talk to im here

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