Friday, December 27, 2013

The Human Chain Comments

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We were all born not just merely to exist
But to be an important link to humanity
Some obstacles in life can be quite difficult
There are links in the chain that are weak
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Patricia Grantham
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Melissa Patty 25 August 2015

Wow you have explained this poem so well, very interesting..

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2014

a wonderful message, , you gave, , really a thought provoking poem, , , , ,

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Om Chawla 10 January 2014

Need of strengthening human bond could not have been better emphasized. A purposeful write full of hope and faith. Nice write, Patricia.

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Amitava Sur 07 January 2014

Very encouraging write upholding the need of unity. A lovely write a great lesson. I write 2 lines from one of my poems.... Together... together.... together we live And lonely have to live in den.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 07 January 2014

thought provoking...... nicely written Patricia.... we can make stronger and strongest if we make a chain........ the connection...... the bridge among ourselves........... thanks for sharing......

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Valerie Dohren 02 January 2014

We should all strive to be strong in order to maintain a strong chain. Thought-provoking write Patricia, well done.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 January 2014

A chain is only as strong as it's weakest link. We must strengthen every link for survival. Beautiful poem calling for strengthening human bond. Thank you.

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Joseph Anderson 31 December 2013

A must needed plea for unity done with grace, dignity and eternal hope. Perhaps it may yet happen. Very well done

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Valsa George 31 December 2013

We are not here to foster our own individual existence alone, but to be a link in the great chain of humanity! Each strong link makes the chain stronger! We have to hold fast to one another, so that no enemy will infiltrate into our territory. As you affirm, in unity lies all the strength! ! Great write! ! Wish you a Great New Year of all possible joy and peace! !

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Muhammad Ali 30 December 2013

very nice poem. nice thinking. i agree. just a thing is mysterious to me. that is enemy. who is the enemy!

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

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