Tuesday, October 13, 2015

The House Where The Sun Lived Comments

Rating: 4.5

There was a house that housed nobody
It towered high. No not high, but high
It was not unkempt and
It blooming flowers always pruned.
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Alade Abayomi Idris
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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Superb, Inspiring poem......Wonderfully written.............10+++ Eureka! I announced to my little self This is the house where the sun lives My teachers were wrong to have said The old red sun didn't live in our midst.

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Alade Abayomi Idris

Alade Abayomi Idris

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