Wednesday, May 5, 2021

The House On The Heath Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was walking in full sunlit
just the annoying wailing behind my back
the wind in full sail, that's lack
I waded through it
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2021

In full sunlight day the wind tells the greatest truth. The beauty we feel under warmth of greatness. A nice poem is well penned.

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M Asim Nehal 06 May 2021

To me this house looks similar to the farm house we have in India. All surrounded by wild grass, ants, insects and mosquitos. Nevertheless a house is a house which provides shelter and peace to the mind and body. Nice poem. Madam Sylvia. Full *******

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 May 2021

Very haunting and beautiful; almost like Edgar Allen Poe

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