Tuesday, March 2, 2021

The House Of Winds And Waters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two emerald coasts frame
the cape of the ancient pirates
Among its smooth greyish white rocks
cedar trees being grown faintly within the centuries
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Captain Cur 06 March 2021

An absolutely fabulous and extra-ordinary write. Of course when I saw the word pirate, I will admit it did pique my interest a wee bit!

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Kim Barney 03 March 2021

Very nice. An interesting word you used is 'lave'. I had never heard that word in English before, but the verb "lavar" in both Spanish and Portuguese means "to wash", and sure enough, "lave" means "wash". Thanks for posting this.

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Indira Renganathan 03 March 2021

Exhilarating....just enjoyed...5*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 March 2021

A vivid depiction of a wonderful place. Great imagery.

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