The House Of Relationships Comments

A profound poem, beautifully articulated. CP

a very very well written one.....& i agree with supriya.10+++

Awesome. Well you take any household in India - this is the story. People who live together as one suddenly become strangers, especially when there is a property dispute. I'm adding it to my favorites.10++

absolutely superb...perhaps that must be the case...'enemies of the past..born as husbands..brothers and wives.... excellent....i take this into my favs

I agree with readers..great poem and true to life..sadly..We should learn much from it.Thanks for sharing. A.

it is so sad when brother turns against brother, parent against child (or vise-versa) ... such a tragedy...

Hello Dr.. After a long time.. you did write a new one? .... yeah this is as good as it gets indeed.. you do write well sir... 'Was it in vain cried the Christ bold Man’s enemies would Be in his own household' this is the kind of a poem that they give us to analyze for literature.. in that sense there is lot to analyze here... I like your third stanza too.. I mean what you say is true.. the world has turned out be treacherous and sinful place that, sisters and brothers have become sworn enemies.. that's how it is. in our own house holds there are lots of conflicts.. I mean even I fight with my sister for all sorts of things lolss.. ..... good write.. top marks10++ Cheers shan

i loved this one.it states the reality like nothing else.good write.would appreciate more poems of this genre from you.thanks

A down to earth poem, i found it to be, doc! The whole life one fights with the outer world whereas the deadliest enemy is within oneself!

A super write Dr. Hitesh and absolutely true of today's world....10++++

very true........................sir