Thursday, December 3, 2015

The House Comments

Rating: 4.5

It has four walls
and two windows,
but it's pretty,
even if it's dark.
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Panos Ambelas
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Kim Barney 23 December 2015

Interesting poem. I wonder about the blood and the people who died. Was there a war? A home invasion? Burglary gone bad? A poet's note might be a good idea.

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Panos Ambelas 25 December 2015

The blood symbolizes the 4th of May 1886 Haymarket affair in Chicago, which was the start for the international workers day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2015

'To open the windows' for fresh air! Nice work.

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Panos Ambelas 19 December 2015

Thanks!

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Kelly Kurt 03 December 2015

An interesting style and message. Thanks, Stanos

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Sofia Kioroglou 03 December 2015

Good poem! Greetings from Athens! Welcome to poemhunter.com

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James Joseph 03 December 2015

Good poem. I enjoyed it!

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