The House Comments

It's a very nice composition...loved it

Hi Bharati, Very nostalgic... In so little words, you are able conjure up the entire emotions of love, fond memories of childhood.... Loved this endearing poem.

they bear the smell and touch Of my beautiful days . Deep Nostalgia. Thank you Bharati Nayak. Our house is the most important among many things that keep us nostalgic of

Your last two lines here I cite: But the house will remain the same Always, in my memory lane. Absolutely true. Sweetest words ever said that come from your Beautiful Mind. Thank you so much for this sweetest poem. A 10+++++++++++++++

Memories are the beautiful treasures of life....the place where we have spent much time is like heaven for us..thanks for sharing

I recently went to my old home The trespasser has nearly become owner he has renovated the house to his choice what can I do I only visit once in a way and tears fall.But a mango tree I planted years ago now bears fruit he eats all This is life we must accept all is not silver nor gold at times memories become old better to leave them ere they become like black coal Just smile and laugh a way have a mango if the trespasser says else out you go the lawyer told him so good poem

Years after i saw it again! The House. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

When you visit your lovely house after many years you gain new perception. Mango trees echo and bloom. Jasmine and hibiscus bloom bringing spring in life. Old chair remain inside. Outer views may change but inner views motivate mind. An interesting poem is well penned. This is an excellent ode poem to your lovely old house...10

they are full of LIFE- - - - - - - saved in memory.....a fine reminiscence