The House Comments

The imagery you used just fit to build a nice house...but a house in poetry only hahahaha...joking, nice one Subodh..write more! _Unwritten Soul

My favorite so far.....I liked the ending (I would recommend splitting that last line after expanse so that you don't end a line on an article) .

I like your imagery :)

beautiful poem. great word choice. a job well done, friend!

I love it, that it is short, but says the thought. Keep on, do it for yourself, be happy that you did a good job.

Beautifully written. How nicely you have made one to move silently from the beautiful house to the vast universe! Great write.

well done friend, loved it! beautiful combination of words.keep it up! ! !